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Shadowland...

September 10th, 2011 (10:41 am)

It took me a week and a half, because it's about 125,000 words and 30 banners, but I've completely revised Shadowland, the story from hell.

It's a crossover with the Drizzt saga and with the War of the Spider Queen, and features not one but two Middle-earths, complete with two Legolases, two Eowyns, and various other characters mistaken for their doubles...

I haven't changed the plot, which is still -- er -- complicated, and it still begins with the world's most boring recap/prologue, but I have given the whole thing a good editing, re-written some of the sections so that it's clearer when the story changes point-of-view, and neatened up a lot of the dialogue so that it reinforces the plot instead of throwing out all sorts of (unintentional) red herrings.

And, for now, I'm reasonably happy with it!



























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Posted by: curiouswombat (curiouswombat)
Posted at: September 10th, 2011 11:46 am (UTC)
Shiny!

Pretty banners! I think they will certainly help anyone who has no real concept of Drow etc - especially the Hook horror one.

And I will look forward to having the time to read it all through again.

Posted by: ningloreth (ningloreth)
Posted at: September 10th, 2011 05:29 pm (UTC)

Thank you! I was pleased with the Hook horror because (of course) he's a painting, and so is the drow, LOL!

I hope you enjoy it. I think it's intelligible now.

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